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I have been working on trying to come up with my own manga. (I know at this point its total crap! lol) However, I like the idea but I would like to see what you guys think:

Story: (not well planned out yet XD)

Basically, during the like 1900 in London, There was a couple madly in love with each other. However, one Stormy gloomy EVIL day, his wife was driving back home from picking up her husbands medication, cause he was diagnose with cancer (not sure were yet). So suddenly she crashes or something, havent made up my mine in that.. well long story short, she dies, the husband is in total despair and cries to the skies!! suddenly falls unconscious in the cold ground while the rain washed away the remaining of his tears…. he sees a vision of like a devil-like figure who tells him that he can bring her back by collecting enough souls of the useless (humans)………

Years later, he runs an organization called S.A.W. (Soul Arrangement Workshop), and what they do there is they lease souls to desperate people who want bring back love ones. The catch is if they dont make there monthly payments, The Collectors come to there house to get back the leased soul including the person who signed for the lease…. Im not sure how, but somehow the moon was destroyed during the stormy night, and now the organization owns an artificial moon which grants powers (Karabela "Dark Curse") to The Collectors.

Here are some sketches of possible Collectors:

forgot to mention, the collectors are all dead corpses. They passed away and brought to this death life unwillingly by the Manager of S.A.W.

Main Collector or Leaser:

Instinct Mode

His girlfriend dies, so he kills himself aswell! blah blah! then the Manager is interested in him so he brings him to the Death Life not letting him rest in peace. He gets mad that now he has to live with his tortured soul of his love ones death. However, the Manager brings back his girlfriend, however the connection isnt the same as when they were alive…….. basically he is loyal to the manager to get close enough to bring him down….

Here are the rest:

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Story: The parents left the triplets at a foster home or Adoption Agency thingy! The people who ran the place kept the children locked in cages with no food. One by one the triplets fell till there was only one left. To survive he had to eat his brothers corpses. He managed to escape… and it goes on….

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This is the girlfriend of the Main Collector.. They kinda have a similar story like the couple I mentioned before, well about the girlfriend dying! lol dont feel like going into detail.

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C-7-Karabela

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This is the Main Collector's brother… I cant remember his story…. however, he is very delusional person.

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I know its not all that great and all!! NEEDS A LOT OF WORK!!! but please tell me what you think about it! or maybe suggestions if you want!! :)

plus ETC.

A few more drawings i want to share!!! :D

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….and there!!!