Here is a preview screenshot of my new sci-fi horror TDS called "S-C-A-R: Strategic Covert Armed Responce" which I have submitted recently to this site and am currently awaiting approval. The game was previously called S-T-Ar and that's why the screenshot has a different name in the heading.
S-C-A-R is set in the future where humans have been virtually wiped out and you have been chosen to go to the alien planet on a special mission to save humanity.
Looks ok, but get some lighting in there! I recommend Pheonix101's engine.
Or my engine. [:D]
I will impliment it for you if you want. PM me.