I Wrote A Song & Happy April 29th

Posted by Jabberwock on April 29, 2008, 1:09 p.m.

- April 29 -

Bodily state: sick, but not too sick.

Mental state: nearly euphoric.

Reading: The Things They Carried by Tim O'Brien. An incredible book, if books are your thing.

Listening to: IN RAINBOWS IN RAINBOWS IN RAINBOWS

…and Simon and Garfunkel. With a side of Crosby, Stills, Nash and Young.

Playing: IN RAINBOWS

Watching: IN RAINBOWS

Dreaming: IN RAINBOWS (no, not really.)

I have just discovered that apparently there was some brilliance hiding in IN RAINBOWS that I never noticed before. Quite a bit of it, actually. And on top of the brilliance that I did notice… well, it's a lot of brilliance.

- Song -

So I've been going on and on (and possibly even on) about writing songs, without ever posting one. So now, I am posting one. It is far from serious, and it is a little old, like six months old. My singing is much better now (or would be if I weren't sick) as are my guitaristry and my production skill. But I like it anyhow. Maybe give it a listen. And maybe tell me what you think.

Robots Are Taking Control

Lyrics:

robots are taking control of the space station tonight.

they're leaving nobody alive because that's the way that robots take control of things.

I was going to also post a story I wrote, but the resulting wall-o-text was so massive and frightening as to discourage me. Maybe next time.

Because all text and no images make this a dull blog. Good day.

Comments

eagly 16 years, 6 months ago

Nice to see you again. In Rainbows is pretty good, yeah. :D Downloading your song now.

Hey, that song is pretty good, hehe. I liked the robotic backing vocals and the sound of the guitar suited the song very well. Good job!

PY 16 years, 6 months ago

I'm walking on rainbows, ooh ooh ooh!

(Yes, I know it's sunshine)

s 16 years, 6 months ago

Because all text and no images make this a dull comment

Because all text and no images make this a dull comment

Because all text and no images make this a dull comment

Too many rainbows with jolly beans?

Also, may I ask, did you choose this piece of robitically altered music for the screening it puts on the voice?

Nice way of mixing tech and notastech. I didn't realize how much it decays until it looped, always nice how relistening can make one notice such new things of a piece

Because all text and no images make this a dull comment

Because all text and no images make this a dull comment

Because all text and no images make this a dull comment

Polystyrene Man 16 years, 6 months ago

Quote:
The Things They Carried by Tim O'Brien. An incredible book, if books are your thing.
We read a portion of that in my AP English class. It's pretty cool how he gives the weight of everything he describes. I like the style.

In Rainbows! I've forbidden myself to listen to Radiohead for the next few months. Then, a couple weeks before the concert, I'll binge on their music and explode when I finally arrive in Massachusetts to see them :)

The song sounds like a good song structurally speaking, it just needs some better recording. I also think a little TR808 action would fit perfectly and maybe some more robot effects here and there. You should also bring out the guitar a bit more, the vocals were too loud by comparison. And post the lyrics!

Ah, so glad you finally uploaded some music.

Jabberwock 16 years, 6 months ago

The recording was supposed to sound like crap - at the time, I was missing a lot of my recording equipment (well, I say that because it wasn't really mine, and because my brother took it when he went to college). So, like all I had was an electric guitar and a green plastic toy amplifier. And, of course, some vocal effects.

I'm glad you guys like it. Maybe this is the motivation I need to record new songs… except that my voice is totally gone due to the cold I have right now.

Jabberwock 16 years, 6 months ago

Read the whole book of The Things They Carried if you get a chance, BTW. It's all very good, and the last thirty pages or so are just brilliant.

OBELISK 16 years, 6 months ago

I've been listening to In Rainbows quite a bit, though there are a few songs on there I have a very hard time liking.

Jabberwock 16 years, 6 months ago

That used to be the case with me, as well, but I like them all now. Not quite equally, but pretty close - I think the main part of Bodysnatchers isn't that great (not compared to the rest of the album, anyways), but the bridge is damn brilliant. And I felt Arpeggi was subpar until today, when I realized just how brilliant all that guitar work is. House Of Cards is probably my least favorite song, but I still like it.

R 16 years, 6 months ago

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The recording was supposed to sound like crap
Good man.