Look at me! I'm a blog! [Kp28]

Posted by Killpill28 on May 8, 2008, 9:23 p.m.

I started it.

Part 1, not much of a read, but you guys can't handle more anyway! XD

It's a image, because I like to format.

Comments on the story so far would be nice.

I think I'm going to cut "foreboding" out, I think it does not fit.

9509 hits as of writing(a bit after)

Comments

Ronnica 16 years, 7 months ago

I like it. A tad bit dark, but its captured my attention so… GIMME MOAR!

Killpill28 16 years, 7 months ago

I may later.

Jaxx 16 years, 7 months ago

Very nicely written. Good job. =)

s 16 years, 7 months ago

Good job taking a picture of the cursor

And yes, taking out foreboding would be interesting

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The darkness of one's mind is, isn't it?