The straw dog is out in the street.

Posted by Makato on Oct. 4, 2005, 7:31 p.m.

I am addicted to this song like I was addicted to DDR. Canadonian should know how obsessive I am over DDR. I can't wait to get Advent children. It's been 2 weeks since it's been available to me, but I've only gotten the chance to watch the first half. It's so ironic and stupid. =P I'm going to post my poem. Tell me what you think about it.

"The secret."

Upon these steps, laughed many friends

All shared and loved many things.

Upon this deck, the elderly grimaced

Wishing they had the youth they once had.

Upon this kitchen, slaved a very busy mother

Cooking and cleaning for her family

Upon this parlor, lazed a large tired husband

Who waited attentively for dinner to be finished.

Upon this staircase was the gate way to an afterlife

A gateway to paradise.

Upon this staircase many have passed

And an empty house cries out –

Cometh to me, o’ wise lord and bless me with thine power.

Cometh to me, o’ wise lord and vanquish all that cowers.

Upon these steps, no one will laugh

For all of the friends have gone.

Upon these steps, a secret will be told

That no one shall ever know.

@~…

What do you think?

*Poofs into a black smoke and is gone*

Comments

twisterghost 19 years, 2 months ago

will he ever run out of colors? the world will never know.

Juju 19 years, 2 months ago

We will know when he runs out and repeats a colour without us knowing… Oh wait but then we won't know… Argh.