Concept

Posted by RhysAndrews on June 22, 2006, 5:56 a.m.

I'd like an honest opinion on what you guys think of this storyline. It's only an early plot, it'll be worked on.

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Twas the wedding anniversary of a quiet, young couple; They danced through the night, embracing each other into their arms, remembering the life they've had together, and anxiously waiting for the time together they have to come. Yet as the night grew into early morning hours, a banging on the couples front door broke the rhythm of the music and dance. Standing before the Lady of the house, as she greeted whoever stumbled upon their household, was a rather gothic man.

"A message from our great Theedia."

As the blade sank into the Lady's stomach, she fell and landed on the now blood-washed floorboards. The music and dance came to a blood-curdling screamly end; and the mysterious man disappeared like a phantom.

With the house now haunted with only a ghost of the innocent woman sacrificed for her artifact, a most beautiful wedding ring, The now retired warrior opened the dusty crate. Determined to recontent himself, without his wife's presence, he displayed to himself his Armour, Weapon, and Shield. Originally the dented, over-used battle clothing was the only thing in-between their marriage. However, the attire was not being used for crime this time; Rather the opposite. With only the clue of "A Great Theedia", the warrior boarded up his house and set upon his journey.

Comments

Theonlywonderboy 18 years, 6 months ago

Sounds cool. I realy like the story. I just hope the gameplay is good.

RhysAndrews 18 years, 6 months ago

The gameplay will mostly be a platformer where you travel across europe, fighting crime, trading, and ultimately, tracking down whoever this Theedia dick is.

-Rhys

Polystyrene Man 18 years, 6 months ago

The gameplay sounds like it will be fun, but the story is generic and unoriginal. Just my honest opinion [:)]

melee-master 18 years, 6 months ago

Heh, nice. But, like Polystyrene said - it's kinda generic.

Kenon 18 years, 6 months ago

I thought of Pirates! when I read the storyline.

Quietus 18 years, 6 months ago

That's awesome. I'd hit it.

Er, play it, I mean. :|

Amarin 18 years, 5 months ago

Nice story. And, nice avatar. xD

Cesar 18 years, 5 months ago

hmm, how about they take her, and as you progress they torture her, finally killing her and then you fight Theedia. it would be based on revenge and love, which are 2 emotions instead of just revenge.

Cesar 18 years, 5 months ago

really good story, though, i forgot to point out…