I named my mystery game Age Of Ellesmere, and I added some new updates to the storyline. I cut out the dwarves and Orcs landing in a spaceship, it was lame. Instead, i made the Dwarves come out of their caves in Northern Africa, and the Orcs are really large, brutal humans that came from the middle east, instead of being dumb brutes with swords.

I also submitted my mouselook example, so it'll be here in a few days