Alrighty then, since I am at my Grandmother's, and only have her laptop, I am going to be writing a part of a story every day. Here is the first part.
Fate: Twisted like a Mind
Part 1
The blood of my friends on my hands, their bodies before me. The gun that had silenced their screams–between my eyes, the man who had killed them behind it. The man that wore a wicked grin. The man that spoke of fate, of theirs, of mine. "Fate, you can't run from it, you can't hind from it. And I can see it, I control it." His finger twitched on the trigger, but he did not fire, just smiled and spoke to me darkly. "I control mine, I controlled theirs, and I control yours." His grin grew wider and his voice rose. "Now, follow my design!" A shot fired, and the room spun, the light from the window dimmed, I fell into darkness./////Thats all for today, what do you think of it?I need to spell check it later, no Firefox here:[-Killpill28-
For me it wasn't a bad story, I want to find out what happens next, just don't make it so… errrr dark.
I have to use laptops sometimes too, whats the problemwow sk8 your stupid, spelling doesn't matter much unless it's illegible.