...I Can't Handle Criticism

Posted by Ronnica on June 30, 2010, 2 a.m.

(My goal is to make you cringe at least once.)

The gorgeous girl layed on the ground, her blonde hair soaking in the pool of blood excreting from her torn scalp. Her torquiose eyes remained opened in a frightened expression and began to roll back into her head, the whites of her eyes were still pink and irritated from crying salted tears. Her mouth would have open in shock if her jaw hadn't been broken. It hung open to the side, discontected from her cranium. Blood filled her mouth and poured out the sides and leaking over her ears, bubbling out of them too.

The loss of blood made her naturally pale skin even whiter and unrecognizable with the mutilation. Her natural blush was faded emensly as her life continued to drain from her body and out onto the ground. The odor of blood and flesh was strong enough to make a pig vomit, yet the she-killer remained unmoved, undisgusted, and unashamed.

She basked in the glow of the moonlight, and admired her reflection in her victims blood. The corpse layed in an eerie broken position, but it was the shape of victory for the murderer. Delicious revenge. There was no better dish to serve and enjoy. Maybe a platter to try again tomorrow? Perhaps…

Quote:

Me: I hate it when you guys let the cat go outside, she gets all dirty…

My brother: Shut up, they always grow back.

Me: ??

HAVE A GREAT DAY!!!! I LOVE YOU ALL SOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!

Comments

DSG 14 years, 3 months ago

wooo

NeutralReiddHotel 14 years, 3 months ago

I still wonder why your background is black. Mainly, who made it black.

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Ronnica 14 years, 3 months ago

@ DSGames : weee?

@ d-bridge : Arc made it black

Scott_AW 14 years, 3 months ago

I see black in only the banner.

DSG 14 years, 3 months ago

woo, i like it.

MMOnologueguy 14 years, 3 months ago

Quote:
excreting
I lol'd

Iluvfuz 14 years, 3 months ago

Quote:
Delicious
I cringed. *gets something to eat*

Unaligned 14 years, 3 months ago

Now all you need is someone to draw an incredibly realistic picture of the blog. That would be totally awesome :D

Cesque 14 years, 3 months ago

Quote:
It hung open to the side, discontected from her cranium.

What caused it to become so discontent, an argument?

Quote:
The corps layed in an eerie broken position

She destroyed the whole military?

Seriously, auto-correction is not enough for some people… get yourself a dictionary :P

Plus, I don't know what's weirder - vampires having a reflection, or blood being reflective?

sirxemic 14 years, 3 months ago

lol @ Cesque