(My goal is to make you cringe at least once.)
The gorgeous girl layed on the ground, her blonde hair soaking in the pool of blood excreting from her torn scalp. Her torquiose eyes remained opened in a frightened expression and began to roll back into her head, the whites of her eyes were still pink and irritated from crying salted tears. Her mouth would have open in shock if her jaw hadn't been broken. It hung open to the side, discontected from her cranium. Blood filled her mouth and poured out the sides and leaking over her ears, bubbling out of them too. The loss of blood made her naturally pale skin even whiter and unrecognizable with the mutilation. Her natural blush was faded emensly as her life continued to drain from her body and out onto the ground. The odor of blood and flesh was strong enough to make a pig vomit, yet the she-killer remained unmoved, undisgusted, and unashamed. She basked in the glow of the moonlight, and admired her reflection in her victims blood. The corpse layed in an eerie broken position, but it was the shape of victory for the murderer. Delicious revenge. There was no better dish to serve and enjoy. Maybe a platter to try again tomorrow? Perhaps…
Quote:
Me: I hate it when you guys let the cat go outside, she gets all dirty…My brother: Shut up, they always grow back.Me: ??
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That was certainly quite… descriptive.
Naturalism meets gore. I like it.
Don't worry, Cesque's always like that. =)
You spelt corpse wrong. >:(
I don't use dictionaries. My family doesn't believe in girls owning books =P
Also, I fixed it.You have the internet, you don't need a book.
And the Internet comes with free dictionaries.