So yeah, I went to a school dance today, and saw a friend of mine. I'd been a bit angry at her for lying to me about another girl liking me, so I decided to talk to her about it. The bitch gets the nerve to turn it around so I look like the bad guy. So after stewing in extreme loathing for a few hours, I randomly started writing songs. I just finished the second one. Here they are, tell me what you think(they both share a rather dark theme, just so you know ahead of time):

"You Must be Crazy"

sometimes, I can honestly swear

you can't even pretend you care

about my wants, about my needs

hating myself, forgetting to breathe

[pre-chorus]:

you can act like you're innocent,

like you never really knew

but I've turned to tables,

the next one to | go | is you

/ hurt /

[chorus]:

you're out of your mind!

can't explain it any other way

just try to control

| the hate you spread | everyday

/ the ones you hurt /

======

sometimes, I can honestly say,

I never liked you anyway

so get yourself away from me,

this time, it's your turn to bleed

[pre-chorus x 2]

[chorus]

[bridge]:

It's true, what they always say

never could find a way

to explain how I feel

but unlike you, I'm for real

so go, put on your old facade

acting like you're a fucking gift from God

I thought I knew you, oh so well

but now I see, you're straight from hell

[chorus x 2]

| and / denote alternate lyrics when the line is repeated.

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"Congratulations"

I can't even begin to say

how you kill me, everyday

so don't you even look my way

this time around, it's you who'll pay

[pre-chorus]:

It seems there's been a break-down in communication

I think it's time I put you back in your station

[chorus]:

I could yell, I could scream

but beating you down is what I dream

couldn't put reason against what you do

congratulations - I hate you

======

I don't know why I even try

you can't even look me in the eye

here it comes, another lie

tonight's the night, our loyalties die

[pre-chorus]

[chorus x 2]

[bridge]:

you act like it's my fault, I don't understand

sometimes the mouth is quicker than the hand

I barely got the stars, when I ask for the moon

If I never hear your voice again, it'll be too soon

[chorus x 2]

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"There's Nothing Wrong"

it never ceases to amaze me,

the damage you can do

just because you want someone else

to hurt just like you

so go on, leave,

and pretend there's nothing wrong

and lay the blame on me

like you did all along

[chorus]:

hate

note to self

hate

don't trust anyone else

hate

just go back to hell

because I'd rather hate you than anyone else

======

now that you know the score

inner demons consume you

like never before

now that you've seen

all you saw

you need to shut your mouth

before I break your jaw

[chorus x 2]

Ok, it's kinda hard to judge since you guys don't know the rythm to the lyrics, but give it a shot, eh? I know the lyrics kinda suck, but it's hard to focus when you're pissed off.

<i>quod me nutrit me destruit</i>

"What nourishes me, destroys me"