Just one portrait done right now, second in progress.
This is the final design for Jade, who I posted a really terrible drawing of a while back, and the style I've settled on for the game's art.Added 9/27/2010 @ 12:46 AM
Any comments or criticism? Obviously if you don't like anime style art you're not going to like it, but whatever.
Just get rid of some lines at the convergence of arm, armpit and boob.
Cool, thanks for all the feedback. I threw up a WIP second portrait. It's not done but I need to sleep, so I might as well throw it up now as a WIP.
I like the first one much better, but I'm not much of an artist so idk other than that :(
I think what cyrus said is correct though.I like the first one better too the second one looks like a hoe.
Might wanna shrink down the boobage just a little.
theres something faintly manish about the second one
On the second, the perspective on the eyes and glasses is a little extreme.
@Everyone
Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it. The second one definitely needs work.@CyrusActually, I don't like larger chests. >.>; I don't like girls like the second one much at all, probably why I'm having a harder time getting it right (I spent less time on the entire, finished Jade you see above than I did on what I have so far on Carmilla).alright, time to state the obvious.
Boobs.tits