"Poem"

Posted by marbs on March 26, 2007, 3:14 p.m.

“Poemsâ€? make no sense to me,

They make no sense at all.

All poems should rhyme,

Have rhythm; be in time,

Not drivel on in some metaphorical way.

I don’t see poems the way others do,

I just see them - thin and bare.

What is on top, is the only thing, about which I really care.

I find it hard to see the deeper meaning,

And I hate writing note after note.

I prefer poems that rhyme,

And keep in time,

Just like this poem I wrote.

Comments

marbs 18 years ago

I take it you like the poem, hmm?

chicklet 18 years ago

you barely saw that?^_^ ha!

yeah… i think its cause

i like white meat you know? mmm yummy *thumbs up*

marbs 18 years ago

Note to self:

Bring in order form, initial designs, and improve evaluation.

marbs 18 years ago

Note to self:

Quality check

-Asked drill size

-Checking if components are the right way around

hogofwar 18 years ago

cool!

hogofwar 18 years ago

yeah!

frenchcon1 18 years ago

marbs just gets more and more awesome with each blog.

RetroVortex 18 years ago

Nice poem!

love the last line, its gold!

Nighthawk 18 years ago

I like it! [:D]

marbs 18 years ago

^_^