"Poem"

Posted by marbs on March 26, 2007, 3:14 p.m.

“Poemsâ€? make no sense to me,

They make no sense at all.

All poems should rhyme,

Have rhythm; be in time,

Not drivel on in some metaphorical way.

I don’t see poems the way others do,

I just see them - thin and bare.

What is on top, is the only thing, about which I really care.

I find it hard to see the deeper meaning,

And I hate writing note after note.

I prefer poems that rhyme,

And keep in time,

Just like this poem I wrote.

Comments

marbs 17 years, 8 months ago

I take it you like the poem, hmm?

chicklet 17 years, 8 months ago

you barely saw that?^_^ ha!

yeah… i think its cause

i like white meat you know? mmm yummy *thumbs up*

marbs 17 years, 8 months ago

Note to self:

Bring in order form, initial designs, and improve evaluation.

marbs 17 years, 8 months ago

Note to self:

Quality check

-Asked drill size

-Checking if components are the right way around

hogofwar 17 years, 8 months ago

cool!

hogofwar 17 years, 8 months ago

yeah!

frenchcon1 17 years, 8 months ago

marbs just gets more and more awesome with each blog.

RetroVortex 17 years, 8 months ago

Nice poem!

love the last line, its gold!

Nighthawk 17 years, 8 months ago

I like it! [:D]

marbs 17 years, 8 months ago

^_^